kiwi-kiwi's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Waterfall]

Bravo

Again, nice style, it looks wonderful and artsy.
Unfortunately there are some flaws with this, rocks by the waterfall, as far as I know are always round, or mostly curved, because they have been eroded by water during lots of years, so the first thing that pops up are the straight lines on the waterfall rocks to the left.

Also another thing that looks wrong in my opinion is that waterfalls make foam when they reach a horizontal surface, so if you decide to make something similar, you could make some foam where the water halts so to speak.

And one last thing, that glassy screen really puts me off for some reason, I would either eliminate it, or put it on the entire screen.

Anyway overall this is a great piece of art, hope to see more.

InsertFunnyUserName responds:

Thanks and thanks for the detailed review :3

That's a good point about the rocks.

[Look Away]

Good job

First of all I'd like to say nice work, you stile is very nice, but the person's face ends a bit too abruptly and if you ask me the ear should be a bit more to the back and somewhat higher than it is right now.

Otherwise great piece of art, I love the shading, specially the way you combined the red influences with the rest of the lighting, good job

InsertFunnyUserName responds:

Thanks.

I agree on the face.